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Far east Japan

atom bombs
killed innocent human
only in Japan

A contest entry

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  • Pollycheck
    December 4, 2007

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    atom bombs
    killed innocent human
    only in Japan

    Thank you for entering my ku contest. This is a well written haiku, but it is not in the tradition 5-7-5 form that is required for this contest.


  • NoWayJo
    September 28, 2007
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    I had come to read this haiku previously when I realized I had kept a website bookmarked where there are some very eloquent haiku and drawings by Japanese children of these attacks. Unfortunately, I can't seem to find the link but if I do I'll certainly pass it on to you.

    Thank you for this eloquent and thought-provoking entry, Sandip...I really appreciate.

    Jo

  • star wars fanatic
    September 19, 2007

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    Only is a strong word. Innocent people die every day due to war by other means, planes crashing into buidings for example? Though a sad event, this happens all the time, not just in Japan.


  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 13, 2007

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    Wow,

    This says alot, in such few words.
    These forms tend to do that when done well.
    Good job, and thanks for sharing.
    Good luck, peace, poeticweaver.