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Hippie House

 

Welcome to my hippie house,
I love a hippie women, with a hippie mouse.
The birds are singing so have know doubts,
Your see a lot of loving in our hippie house
Your see a lot of loving its our hippie house...

The walls are painted with  kaleidoscope eyes,
The plants are waving, high, high, high.
Neighbor's still whispering, my oh my..!
Your see a lot of loving in the hippie house,
Your see a lot of loving its there hippie house...

If you peak through our windows,
Your see a doorway through time.
We might look strange, no worries that fine,'
You've never see rainbows, been painted so bright,
You've never see rainbows, that's been painted so high...

Welcome to my hippie house,
I love a hippie women with a hippie mouse.
The birds are singing so have no doubts,
Your see a lot of loving in our hippie house,
Your see a lot of loving its our hippie house...

Bouncy carpets, bright tangerine dreams
Illumines tables, glowing in green.
Flickering lamp shades, if you know what I mean,
Your see a lot of loving in our hippie house,
Your see a lot of loving its our hippie house...



:O)

 

Timespell 

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  • SmartBrick
    June 12, 2008

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    NICE!I was already interested reading the title "Hippie House"How creative!Thanks for entering!

    LOVES CONFUSED♥


  • katie-jo
    May 29, 2008

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    I agree with CIMA Punk, it definitely fits with the 60s. Although it reminds me a little of Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds, it seems you are repeating it a little bit.
    Thank you for entering and all the best in the contest.


  • C.I.M.A Punk
    April 27, 2008

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    I want to visit this hippie house one day.
    This is a good songtext which would fit nicely with the (music of the) 60's. The flow is nice too, almost psychedelic.
    Well done and good luck!


  • nobodys-girl
    April 20, 2008

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    ahh i so want to go somewhere just like this! amazing. i also loved the poem. thankyou so much for entering my contest and best of luck!


  • second-born
    April 1, 2008

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    this is lovely...surely I want to visit a 'hippie house' someday because your piece convinced me to do with its delightful thoughts about such a house...thank you for sharing this awesome write!

  • Mercury Rising
    December 19, 2007

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    A really wonderful poem and a delight to read. Best of luck in my contest, and thanks for entering.

    David


  • risewiththesmoke
    December 2, 2007
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    thanks for entering


  • oldphotosonlybringt
    September 29, 2007
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    haha.

    i loved it, thanks bunches for entering..mucho love..xoxoxox

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