Ghost ship rides the venomous sea
As night subsides moonlit beams
Darkened voyage has come to pass
Ominous powers have taken this lass
Gallant she fought this venomous sea
To stay afloat and come to thee
Yet doom has drowned a beauty of might
Upon this fretful moonlit night
Seas will calm and then caress
Claiming the mighty powerful lass
Billows will sink, weaken and swell
Wet grave now bares a story to tell
A contest entry
- No Title II by Nam.
385 points, ended September 27, 2007, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Beautiful

i really liked what you captured in the ships descent into the sea
