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Venomous Sea

Ghost ship rides the venomous sea
As night subsides moonlit beams

Darkened voyage has come to pass
Ominous powers have taken this lass

Gallant she fought this venomous sea
To stay afloat and come to thee

Yet doom has drowned a beauty of might
Upon this fretful moonlit night

Seas will calm and then caress
Claiming the mighty powerful lass

Billows will sink, weaken and swell
Wet grave now bares a story to tell

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  • RottenXHeartX
    September 13, 2007
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    Beautiful

    i really liked what you captured in the ships descent into the sea