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H.E.R.

Her emotions run deep,
She lives happy.

She's the wind in the weeds,
A flower of hundreds of blades of grass.
She Perfectly content.

Don't ruin this for her.

Yourlogic.

Your life.

She's too happy for you to mess this up.

Just walk away, while she's not looking

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  • Victimized
    November 8, 2007

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    YAY!

    Aww it so sweet like a boy in love but cant admit it because heis to shy or thinks she doesnt feel the same...did i figure it out he he probly not O well I love it -claps-


    • no-way-ap
      November 8, 2007
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      hmm

      well kinds i think.
      i never really looked that deep into this poem before.

      i guess it a girl that is just perfectly happy, and the world's alright.when it refers to "your logic, your life," it's talking about judgmental people, the people that always try to bring you down in life.

      if that makes any sense lol.


  • ForNever.x
    September 18, 2007
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    You create a vivid image from your poetry.
    I enoy reading your work


  • infinitechaos07
    September 13, 2007
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    Hey I really like that poem... It's quite meaningful and sadly I wish I could say that I feel like "her"...so content, with emotions running deep ... but I don't exactly think that will ever be the case. I'm starting to think I'm becoming numb. Anywho, thanks for the comment, and I think you write beautifuly.
    -Chaos

    • no-way-ap
      September 14, 2007
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      thanks.

      i really can't wait to get to read more of yours. Between school and family, i'm never on the computer. aim-agmp0812 if you want to talk sometime.


  • Arizona Sunset
    September 13, 2007
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    beautiful write thank you for sharing


  • Matt Holck
    September 13, 2007
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    no eyes to hold you down


  • captain howdy
    September 13, 2007
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    Very nice! Thank you for your lovely entry!


  • Riftkin gold member
    September 13, 2007

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    She Perfectly content.

    Don't ruin this for her.

    Yourlogic.

    Your life.


    this states a lot of
    stress and a way of
    trying to get under control

    Riftkin


  • no-way-ap
    September 12, 2007
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    ATTN!

    I"M SORRY< I DON"T KNOW HOW TO MAKE AN AUTHOR"S NOTE< SO.....
    "This artwork is by Il Tramonto on deviantArt."

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