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I am a Lion

I am a lion. I am alone
I am grateful, but I want more
I walk cautious, my step insecure
my paw heavy but gentle minded

I have seen more than I had wanted
felt less than I had expected
and expressed nothing of that which was me

I am a story told by an empty bottle
a song played on a broken radio
and a dream of a dreamers dream

I am a lion, and I am alone
homeless, heartless, but I want more

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  • Violent Glass
    September 12, 2007
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    great

    i'm not real good at commenting
    but i loved the way you write this
    it was subtle yet still making a point
    and i really think you should write more
    i wanna see what else you got