She's not normal...
tracing the soft off white
scars that race up her arms...
she likes the way the blood drips into the sink...
and the way her tears taste,
as they hit her tongue.
She doesn't want to die...
she just craves that sick sick attention.
Life is meaningless,
She has lots of secrets...
she lies...
just for the pure amusement of others.
She cheats,
oh yes, rules don't apply to her.
She's a cheap slut,
who enjoys sex and games
a simple whimper who enjoys
dirty, raunchy sex games.
She doesn't care
what you think
how you think.
...Death applies to her.
Life just bores her.
I'm sorry,
You won't understand.
Author notes
Writers block won't go away.
Please tell me what you think
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ohhh this is raw. and aggresive. I lvoe the feeling that comes across in this and the short lines give it a great effect.
amazing jobb bb!
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Hey this is really good you are a great writer even if you do have writers block..keep writing
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nice. not your best, but still strong. sorry i haven't commented in a while. hopefully i'll be back to my old mucho commenting self now. i liked this because it was truthful and just real and sarcastic and truthful. very well done.
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I'm begining to think this writers block won't go away
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Yes I do!
People think that life is meaningless and very wrong (as in lies) People as in Gothics, don't know that's there's more to life than hatred and Satan. No one cares about Goths because they only focus on the dark side. Now for people who cheat and want sex, those people need to get out more, because I think she wants people to notice since people don't care for her. I feel so sorry for her; you'll make it threw life.
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