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Beyond the stars

"Beyond the stars
lies what we search for most,
but it is far and have no ship do we,
and so we wait for that one soul
who has the means to take us there,
and acts as fuel to take us
beyond the stars"

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  • KitCatMnM
    October 5, 2007

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    cute.
    I like how it begins and ends with the same words
    I love the "do we" at the end of the third line
    It feels kind of choppy, but not terribly