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Story of a Girl

This is the story of
A girl
Not too pretty
But maybe just a little
Too smart
Growing up happened
Way too quick
With a mother never there
And a father who could not care
Was shipped from aunt to uncle
All for reasons a ten year old
Could never understand.
This is a story of
A girl
Who lived in her own little world
Learned way too early
That some people should not
Be trusted
What else do you expect
When the ones she was supposed
To trust
Threw her away?
This is a story of
A girl
Who always kept people
Away from her
She would rather die alone
Than be hurt again
This girl kept to herself
And never learned how to treat
Her friends
Maybe this is why this girl
Is still acting like a child
Though this girl
Is all grown-up now.

This story should be over
But maybe
Life’s story is meant
To be ever-changing.
Maybe people
Can change the fate
That was handed
To them.
Maybe, just maybe
This girl’s story
Is not meant to be
Written just yet
Life changes everything
So maybe this girl’s
Happy ending is still out there
Maybe she has a chance.

Author notes

2007 written over many months.

Okay, so this summer I did not write much at all. Mostly I spent it trying to figure myself out (AGAIN). This poem is kinda me over the summer and the last stanza is my thoughts on me now.

Weird, but whatever.

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  • Seven Kinky
    October 8, 2007
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    This is a story of
    A girl
    Who lived in her own little world
    Learned way too early
    That some people should not
    Be trusted
    What else do you expect
    When the ones she was supposed
    To trust
    Threw her away?


    That part speaks to me, I learned early on that it's better not to trust


  • FarFromFlawless
    September 27, 2007
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    Nice

    i like it

    but i dont have much to say about it(sorry)

    but its good

    thanks for sharing