Tired, cold
Out alone
Sitting silently
Watching like a fool
The things I know not,
are the things I need most
Conformed to a way of thinking
Completely against my will
Subject to the insanity
created by the creator
for each to endure
at their own discretion.
Free will
If that's what you want to call it I suppose.
Please tell me what you think
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wow...this is a deep concept...
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Oh, are you making fun of me?!
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no why do uy say that?
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No reason! I'm just playing a little! =)
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We are supposed to have a choice, but a lot times there isn't really any, is there? The phrasing you used works wonderfully with the melancholy, even resentful, tone of the poem. "The things I know not,
are the things I need most" these lines are really good, and very true!
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