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Final Comfort

She sits by his bed
Late at night
Quietly praying
For him to survive

The fever was growing
His temperature rose
how he caught it
Nobody knows

He's just two months old
Has not yet lived his life
By his bed is his dad
Holding the hand of his wife

They were weary with worry
Tired and quiet
There had been a medicine
But they were to poor to buy it

The baby cried
His mom comforted him
Held him close
His cries were dim

She rocked the poor baby
The baby went still
The mom didn't notice
Her arms he did fill

She glanced down to look
And cried out in the night
The baby had died in her arms
As up rose the dawns light

Author notes

Dark Poem
I believe a baby's death is the most sad, and dark thing that is possible. So unnecessary, and yet, all too often, a life is ended so quickly.

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