Dilutions of hope
Images I see
No matter what I do
There is no hope for me
Slowly dieing
Of my own dust
Wish I could get out
And wander around dusk
Nothing can keep me
Nothing to hold
I just keep falling
ALONE AND COLD
Im used to the darkness
The horror of my life
One day I will be gone
Taken by the blade of the knife
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Nicely penned with some very well put imagery to paint me a morbid picture of depression and desolation.
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Rosemary -
this was chilling
but you write like a pro great work
welcome to ap hope you enjoy it here -
i love this keep it up
best of life
hannah -
this is pretty good, i like it very much =)
i love the last 2 lines of the first stanza, they just seem to be a bit a lot of people have been able to relate to at one time or another...
this is good, well done =)
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