You killed me today
Do you want to know how
I'll tell you of why
I am dead right now
Your words were so sharp
They brought so much pain
They hurt me badly
and brought me shame
You viciously killed me
and now I wonder
Since you're a murdere
Will you kill another?
Author notes
You can kill people with your words. Just one thing can completely change a person.
A contest entry
- Another DARK Contest by Audie-Is-Healed.
320 points, ended September 16, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - MAKE ME SICK by Synthetic-Nightmare.
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i love it ! good job
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Great Theme!
So true! I wish everyone would understand that words really do kill! I HATE that stupid saying "sticks and stones may break my bones but names will never hurt me." It is soooooo untrue! Don't people know this!? Grrr....Now I'm all upset! (HEHE) -
Wow.....i like this a lot and the words in your author's note rang very true. Those who say you can't kill with words are SOOOOO wrong. It's one of the most damaging of weapons and leaves permanent scars on ones psyche. A very great write, you've got talent. KEep at it and good luck in teh contest
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oooh I love this!!!!! Words to hurt, I love how it's like what they said killed you. WOnderful write!!
~Michaela~
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