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Na Na

 

Na Na

By: Mrs. Lady Enthralling 

 

 

 

So do you know what I want?

The answer is do me right

And feed me lust

Lets do the things that lovers do

Lets embrace a eye lock

Let me scratch your cock

 Let my tongue set off your pager

Return my call and unbutton your shirt

Of appetizer feeding me

I don’t care what it takes

I just want to Fuck

So touch me

I am on top of you

Parting your hair

Licking your scalp

The unbuttoning of my mind

 Has released my bra straps

 My breast are erected

 My index finger it moves forward.

I am teasing you

 Do you feel me

 Breathing

She is screaming

I am leaving you

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© Julia L. Clark Registration Number Txu 1 - 259- 764, All rights reserved

 

 

 

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1.Lust
I Feel the heat of lustful
Steamy Na Na
Mrs. Lady Enthralling

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  • dillpickle62
    February 5

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    Noooo...

    Hahaha...Nooo....don't leave! Oh my Gawd you got me!
    All worked up and then you Na-Na'd.
    This is a wicked awesome poem. Just cruising around reading poetry and your name caught me eye. The best kind of cruising for poetry. Thank-you for sharing your talent with the world.


  • moluv10
    January 29
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    Wow! you left me with my toungue hanging out of my mouth! i'm all worked up now!


  • Mystal LaRose
    January 24
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    another great pice, an amzaing write, this is very good wow beautiful write

  • secberm
    January 17

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    Now why am I drawn to your erotica? I guess because their titles are usually such attention whores! LOL Nonetheless, when I spread them open (like books baby, not legs), you never fail to make me explode (mentally baby get your mind out of the gutter).

    Love your flow.

    Always,
    DEZ


  • kennethlaney
    October 25, 2007
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    Wild!

    Another Julia C Piece. Very good for a last hur-rah!


  • Swan song gold member
    October 14, 2007
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    Yes! very lustufl very different Your poetry is all your own love Well done here that is for sure.


  • Florida Sunshine gold member
    October 13, 2007

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    Wow ~ this twists and turns.... especially unexpected last line~ Nice job~

    Thanks for entering the battle of the sex's contest ~ good luck to you~ we'll be making the decision of which writes move up to the top 15 closer to the close of the contest~
  • mcfreeman
    September 29, 2007
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    How did I miss this one...very nice


  • xxlisajazminexx
    September 22, 2007

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    full of life and full of erotic passion as always !!!
    I loved this !!!
    excellent in every way!
    Much love to one of my precious wifeys!
    xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      September 22, 2007
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      thanks babe i try to keep the sheets soaked thank you i will be awaiting a new piec from yourself

  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    September 21, 2007

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    I love the way that you wrote this.
    A wonderful piece all the way through.
    Well done and congratulations to you on
    winning the gold with this one! A truly
    deserving piece. Keep up the wonderful
    work here my friend!




    Jeremy0826


  • darell silver member
    September 14, 2007

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    Oh Hell Yeah!

    This poem was written in golden passion.
    Hot liquid gold that's fired from darkest
    africa. You are so fucking hot Julia.
    Damn baby, I love the way you get down.
    I want some of that NaNa right now.
    Break me off a piece so I can release
    all of this sweet cream in the reality
    of your dreams. Congratulations baby!


  • crystallynnbradford
    September 13, 2007

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    once again another steamy and sensual piece...i thought that you displayed lust very well and the imagery is amazing....you show what your words mean instead of just speaking them....very very good

  • Lick On Her1275
    September 13, 2007

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    NA NA! this was this was absolutly great hun I see you all over all poetry and your quite a artist you will x out the competition unless the contest giver is a fool LMAO

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  • Ephiphany gold member
    September 13, 2007

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    Great take on this sis

    you always know how to unravel a person's Erotic Desirable mind. Keep penning as you do very well in this. I always tell you, that soon your work will be in a movie and posted all over the billboards...Love your work!

    Ephiphany

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  • Mizz HighHeel Class
    September 13, 2007

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    scratch his comment below . this is excellent dear. do me a special favor and never let no one discourage you on how you deliver. i have had people tell me how i have mistakes in my pieces they dont know crap about good lyrics the contest giver will love it/ stay hot!

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  • Mykeee silver member
    September 12, 2007

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    I like the way you set this up, the way the dialogue drops with thought. The only thing I see is the way some of your thoughts are separated. The metaphors are great but you let them sit alone. Metaphors like company . The whole vibe was just arousing, Great entry good luck

    Mykee

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