I’ll never be able to love someone again
At least not completely
Let alone trust them
The last people I loved and trusted
Betrayed me and caused my heart to break
One more blow like that and I will be gone
For my heart will cease to beat for it will be in pieces
Bleeding away my life slowly and painfully.
A contest entry
- [Sell me lie after lie, break my heart time after time, Tell me that you love me always] by over the rainbow--x.
525 points, ended January 19, 2008, 17 entries
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I liked how much emotion was put into so few words.
Thanks for entering,
Although, you've missed the quote && option number from the rules which is meant to go in your authors notes.
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option 6
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Another one that I just had to comment. It's perfect, I love it.
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