He scares me.
I havent known him long at all
But with him hours turn into minutes
Its a scary thing after so many falls
I can talk to him for hours
And not get bored
Its scary cuz its hard for me to turst
But i feel as though im comfortable
And for once
Im not afraid
Not afraid to trust
Im confused
Cuz i truly dont know how to feel
Or what to say
So poetry is the best way
I have been through too much
I have been a yo-yo
Back and forth
I dont want that
Relationships scare me
And i dont think i want that
I dont wanna be used
Or hurt or abused
My mind turns in circles
Its been a while since i have had butterflies
Thats what scares me
Just plain old butterflies
Author notes
New guy...its self expainatory
A contest entry
- come to me.... by crystallynnbradford.
300 points, ended September 13, 2007, 24 entries
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nice but not amazing
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Wow!! Great write!!
Thnx for entering & best of luck
GloriousGift
Heba -
Hey hun, long time no talk. How have things been?
This is a great piece...I can somewhat relate to this actually...I also have someone that I feel this way with. But the bad thing is...remember my ex, chris? well apparently he is coming back to alberta in january to be with me....:S I'm not sure what to do there, but, anyway, this was a beautiful write and hit home for me too so Great Job .And just take it as it comes...try not to worry so much. I agree with crystal when she says lifes to short to worry bout things like that...I know the feeling of being scared to trust again, but give it time, and follow your gut instincts, LISTEN TO YOUR MIND, BUT FOLLOW YOUR HEART.
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i know how you feel...been there, done that....nice imgaery in the piece and hope that you just have a good time...life's just too short to worry about getting hurt
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