Jet black smoke
Rising to the sky
Accompanied with
The citizens cry
A building ablaze
Green Goblins attack
Firefighters try
To hold the fire back
But they are losing hope
Green Goblin is winning
Egging on the disaster
As he is grinning
Who can save them
Is there anyone that can?
A shout from the croud
Look! It's Spiderman!
The crowd looks over head
And yes, it's true
It is Spiderman
Swinging to the rescue
Cought in the action
Hit after hit
Spiderman is losing
How worse could it get
And just when it looked
As though hope was dead
Spidey pulled himself up
And the Goblin fled
Another victory
To our favorite hero
As he helps them fight
The orangey glow
He leaves the scene
Peter Parker again
The crowd bursts into courus 'Spiderman Spiderman
Does whatever a spider can ...'
Author notes
I love spiderman lol
A contest entry
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Comments
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Another victory
To our favorite hero
As he helps them fight
The orangey glow
but what if my hero are the real men and women of the land
Riftkin -
Damn, that made me wanna watch the movies. (I still haven't seen the third one...)This was wicked good, really. The rhyme was straight on, flow was amazing. The topic kicks major ass! I love spiderman as well
I really liked how you coverd every aspect, that he isn't perfect, but he always comes through. And the song at the end, great idea! Very VERY good poem. Gold worthy, no doubt. Best wishes in the contest!
Kelcey Jo
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Wow
This is exellent!
Seriously, the rhyming is perfect and really helps with the flow. And I love the shortness of the stanza, and the way you managed to put the theme tune lyrics into the last stanza was very clever.
Well done!! This is awesome, and good luck in the contest.
iChewGlitter - x
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