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Wakeup Call

 

Wakeup little sleepy eyes
Squint at the alluring sky
Glance through window of your soul
Perceive charismatic nature and extol
Sip and dip in suffused dew
And steal the splendid view
Munch crispy breeze and inhale
Chirp with birds, fly beyond dale
Stretch arms and embrace horizon
Bestow prayers to the rising sun.


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  • baawri
    September 19, 2007
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    Marvellous

    This makes me remember the words of Swami Vivekananda
    Uttishtha Jaagrit Praapyavannibodhyat.(Awake, Rise and stop not until the goal is achieved.) A lovely poem with a beautiful theme. I am happy to come across it. The ending of the poem with the line
    Bestow prayers to the rising sun
    imparts a special touch of spirituality in the poem. Keep the good work.


  • Namita
    September 13, 2007

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    Beuaitful and flawless. The rhyme was wonderful. Thanxx much for entering this beautiful write...

    Candy

    • mina nagi
      September 17, 2007
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      Thank you for your lovely comment...
      It meant a lot to me…

      mina


  • darell
    September 12, 2007

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    Beautiful!

    This was an exquisite exaltation to praise
    of nature and life in all its glory.
    The images were vibrant and spectacular.
    Your words illuminated the canvas with
    rays of hope and joy! Great writing!

  • i cant live16
    September 12, 2007
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    thats nice i like that good job

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