Spiderman, Spiderman...
What happened to your 'do?
I know you're missing Mary Jane,
But that hair just isn't you.
The wall crawler that I know
Doesn't act like this
You're prancing around like a peacock
And throwing hissy fits.
The friendly neighborhood Spiderman
That once we all respected
Is hurting his closest friends
Whom he once protected
Making Mary Jane jealous
And then stealing her show
Trying to kill poor Harry
He isn't evil -he's just slow
You should see by now that your new friend
Is just filling your ear with lies
For instance, you can't really dance
That's just a misconception in your mind
Author notes
Some loving teasing for Spiderman's emo phase in the third movie. That cocky dancing in the street cracked me up.
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You should see by now that your new friend
Is just filling your ear with lies
For instance, you can't really dance
That's just a misconception in your mind
this is hard
but so true
Riftkin -
Can there ever be enough superhero poetry? I thinketh not.
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HA HA HA HA!
ROFL! This is great! I love the take on Spiderman 3. I mean seriously what is up with that whole emo look. Uh! *rolls eyes* Love the line about Harry being slow. Cracked me up! Great write! Kudos to you!
Luv ya oodles!
Courtney
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