a rippling pain
of pleasure
dripping down my teeth
as i stare into your dark soul
you know i have come for you
you, and your death
it is time to play my game
my game of last breath
smell the sweet blood
my eyes change to match the full moon's
bones cracking to change the shape
fur growing to hide the body of the sun
blood lust pounding between the ears
i am after you, my pet
i want you part of my nightime world
hunting those who wish to kill us
fearing the sun and chocolate
lusting the moon and blood
wishing for another run
to someone's death
the sweet sent of blood
pulling us to the bars
and the nightime life
and new prey
a rippling pain
of pleasure
Author notes
a wish is a wish..... i want one more night running with you by me..... lust holding us there.... in eachother.... we are just animals anyways
A contest entry
- Satan's Embrace (The Serpent's Ring) by liquidmindforever.
1150 points, ended September 26, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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blood and chocolate, aye? I figured as much from you, Ang
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Thank you for entering Satan's Embrace
(The Serpent's Ring)
a rippling pain
of pleasure
eyes change to match the full moon's
bones cracking to change the shape
These are the segment that show me
for the most part the rest of the piece
tells me a story rather
than weaving it and leaving me
captive.
Thanks again
Love,
liquid
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Is this about a werewolf? It's a cool entry! It's a little difficult to understand though and although there is a sadistic edge to it it's not quite horrifying. Not to say it was meant to be but it could be improved if you added some in my opinion. Great write!
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