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Toxic Torment

Tragic stories of love askew
Toxic feelings with forbidden adieu

Camouflaged stains on helpless victims
Tormented with loves withered whims

Poisonous cravings soon to be burned
When the pyromaniac lover takes his turn

Looking for a compelling sensation
Struck by reserved infatuation

Spoiled rotten by crystalline thrills
Taking advantage of the broken heart's spills

Just one night leaving but a scar
Then off to find another afar

Surreptitious lovers revealing transgressions
Caused to approach pleasurable obsessions

But simply for one lone night
Then left alone by morning's light

Dissipating time with events obscene
Performing sins a prude could only dream

Haunting love between two so fake
Placing the promiscuous soal at stake

Author notes

You probably caught on, but if not, this was about a one night stand.

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  • star crossed
    September 24, 2007
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    I really like it. There is such a variety of words. amazing.


  • Dead Star--x
    September 20, 2007
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    oooohhhhh i love it... finalist♥
    good luck
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  • crystallynnbradford
    September 12, 2007
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    this is a very unique and really good write. I enjoyed reading it a lot.