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Of Chaos and Treasure

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Fanged jaws do drool as dragons fall in line,

upon a sacred effigy of storm.

Where blood and bond become a crease in time,

to sever fragile sight, so seldom born.

 

Keen claw does come to slash your inner eye,

where feathered hope does shatter on the floor.

And silver scales shine mirrored glint to fly;

yet man does lock his key in every door.

 

Prepare your draft of inner potions lore.

In pewter goblets carried through the years.

Enchanting love and innocence once more,

in laughter carried on the sound of tears.

 

     Leave horded memories of hurt behind.

     To soar your silver wings on tranquil mind.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

wolfspiritguide

pic reminded me of a dragon...and chaos in a cluttered mind

...and snow, after the plows just came through and got it all dirty, uggg and it was just so pure and pretty too

i tried to go with a storm theme to link it with another but it kinda diverted and took it's own path...

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  • omega13
    September 22, 2007

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    Some of the best writing comes out when, after you start writing it, it takes its own course and it's given a new identity. I liked this one alot, very cool

  • JM Kenyon silver member
    September 19, 2007

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    Of Chaos and Treasure by wolfspiritguide

    Title - 9
    Style - 9
    Form - 10
    Spelling - 10
    Captivating - 9
    Originality - 9
    Reaction - 10
    Rules - 10
    Makes sense - 9
    Enjoyable - 10

    total: 95


  • luckynsincere
    September 17, 2007

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    WEll done. I have already began missing your work


    Always,
    Mel


  • Celticmoon
    September 16, 2007

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    Of Chaos and Treasure by wolfspiritguide


    Title - 10
    Style - 9
    Form - 9
    Spelling - 10
    Captivating - 9
    Originality - 10
    Reaction - 9
    Rules - 10*
    Makes sense - 10
    Enjoyable - 8


    total: 94


  • Frodofan silver member
    September 13, 2007

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    I really like where you went with this. I think it's the most creative approach to the prompt I've read so far!

    Title - 10
    Style - 10
    Form - 10
    Spelling - 10
    Captivating - 9
    Originality - 10
    Reaction - 10
    Rules - 10*
    Makes sense - 10
    Enjoyable - 8

    bonus: 10

    total: 107


  • Desire gold member
    September 12, 2007

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    Holy Moly!!

    Love this one busy bee and I am finally getting around to commenting for the computer is my friend now
    Oy!

    Wonderful piece penned and what images
    stain the mind~
    Love it!

    Many blessings to You in the contest
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~

  • tara wilson gold member
    September 12, 2007

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    "Leave horded memories of hurt behind.

    To soar your silver wings on tranquil mind."

    It's always wonderful to read your work, I love it, a wonderful sonnet..

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