Everyone tells me
That you're not good for me
But I disagree
How could that be?
Can they not see my smile?
How it goes on for miles?
You are everything I want
You are everything I need
You hold me close
And never let me feel down
They have it all wrong
You and I are meant to be
And one day even you will see
Author notes
option 2
"love is like a photo"
A contest entry
- heartbreaker by ExpectingMommy18.
550 points, ended September 22, 2007, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice write, good luck in the contest!
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wow this was an amazing poem sweety and you did a good job..please put which option you shose though and read the rules as you were suppose to put something in your authors notes...again thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!!
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thank you and everything should be there now.
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Beautiful
Oh how I remember I was 16 and my husband to be was 21! Everyone was against us. But I got married to him at 17 and we have been married for 28 years. Oh how angry this poem makes me and also so much in love. The title You and Me is perfect, the first line everyone tells me and the last and one day even you will see, basically how wrong they were! I have a poem I wrote about how no one believed we would make it and we proved them wrong!! Thank you for sharing your gift to write poetry!! stavykm
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awww! Kayla!
I love this, its honest, and true, and from the heart.
Its unrequited love, so sad, so real...*sigh* Inrequited love...the story of my life, lol.
I love you girl, and I plan on kicking this guys can asap.
Luv ya! (in a totally non-weird, non-gross, non-bisexual way!)
~AC
~~VoT
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thanks allie. But if you kick Rob's ass, I'll have to kick yours. We are getting along just fine. We may not be together together, but we're happy with what we have. *smiles*
I luv ya, too (in a totally non-weird, non-gross, non-bisexual way!)
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Ah blind love how wonderful it can seem, yet one sided love can be a torture. I love this poem, thank you for allowing me to read it.
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