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Twilight Whispers

 
 
 
~Twilight Whispers~
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Listen, carefully
can you hear?
 
the twilight whispers
in your ear

The sounds of her darkness
brings you near
 
makes you wonder
in awe and fear

And fascination
of the starry light

twilight whispers 
mysterious sight

Shadows forming
here and there

 twilight whispers
in the air 

You walk the night
the velvet sky

enthroned with stars
so bright so high

A gleaming array
of Nature's clothing

she disrobes at night
before day is dawning 

As the twilight whispers
gently in your ear

embrace her darkness
do not fear

Walk with her
kiss her, sweet 

Upon the grass
you place your feet

Listen can you hear
the twilight whispers

As your human lips
come out to kiss her 

 
 
{Copyright}
{c} 2007
Wayne Leon Learmond
{Twilight Whispers}
{All Rights Reserved} 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Author notes

I have used *human lips* at the end of the piece, to show that connection between the Human Being and Nature.

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  • Hope Angel
    July 6
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    This is beautiful. I loved the imagary. Stunning. Thanks for sharing and congrats on the HMs.


  • sweet angel rose
    June 29

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    Absolutely beautiful...I thought you were a dark writer, but this piece is astounding.

    ~Rose~


  • Riftkin gold member
    June 26

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    This is beautiful. I love how you have brought nature and the human touch and combine them.. you are a Master at this dear Dark Knight.

    Riftkin


  • Hetha gold member
    June 26

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    This is spectacular, dear brother! Thank you for sharing this. It's beautiful. Good luck in the contests.


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    June 17

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    I truly loved this one. It was if the night was speaking to me...the Twilight Whispers feel so intimate.
    I found this to be very sensual...
    Thank you for sharing.
    Nor


  • PoeticLove
    June 15

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    I loved this one, how true is the beauty of nature and the love we all should have for "her" but like everything else,

    We seem to tread her under instead of treading lovingly upon her,( lovely poem of the twilight,) natures ' ceiling.'


  • maralisa silver member
    June 15

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    Listen, carefully
    can you hear?

    the twilight whispers
    in your ear

    The sounds of her darkness
    brings you near

    makes you wonder
    in awe and fear

    And fascination
    of the starry lightShadows forming
    here and there

    twilight whispers
    in the air

    You walk the night
    the velvet sky

    enthroned with stars
    so bright so highA gleaming array
    of Nature's clothingembrace her darkness
    do not fear

    Walk with her
    kiss her, sweet

    Upon the grass
    you place your feet

    Listen can you hear
    the twilight whispers

    As your human lips
    come out to kiss her wow this was stuningly beautiful from the begining to the end I loved this congratulations on your well deserved shing thank you for your pleasurable read x


  • Sailor Ptolema silver member
    June 15

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    que bonita~~

    this is lovely! its SO very different from your usual dark writes...but just as good! your skill amazes me!
    I could feel the poem whispering to me as I read it!
    Its perfectly dreamlike!
    well done & thanks for sharing!


  • TexasMomma
    May 23

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    This is a very beautiful piece my friend...you are so talented...I love the imagery in the pieces that you write!
    Keep writing and sharing your work...it really touches the heart!
    Thanks so much for sharing!
    Hugs,Ellan


  • Nature Song silver member
    May 23

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    Twilight whispers at her feet, listen carefully while she sings her silent song. As nature undresses...lie that grass upon her feet, feel her darkness as it sweeps you across her darkened skies at night - do not fear her...in her twilight whispers at night.

    Thank you for sharing this once gain my friend.

    Love it ~Sie

  • Angelflower Greeters member
    May 23

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    This was amazing.. It was soft and yet in a way sensual...The imagery in this was just so vivid,your words just captivated the reader.. It was like no matter what I couldn't stop reading! I've never had that happen to me before! You did a wonderful job in showing how nature and humanity are really one and the same.. Few rarely see that and yet you not only saw it you were able to show us how much we are alike.. Bravo!! you are a wonderful writer!!!
    Please don't ever stop writing! I look forward to more of your works..

    Angel

  • Devoted Huntress
    March 23

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    So beautiful... It's so hard to describe but once I started I could not stop. I just forgot all else as I read the words on the screen, captivated by it's beautiful flowing rhythm. This is truly a masterpiece and tells how humans and nature can and are one in a sense taht some rarely see.

    Keep it up and take care!


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    February 7

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    I think jcat is right!! I can't imagine you writing anything bad Wayne. truly a gorgeous masterpiece...again!!!

    Mary


  • jcat gold member
    February 7

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    WOW Wayne......This was so beautiful!!! You sure are amazing my friend!!! One minute your being demented and the next moment you are writing pure bliss... You truly are a wonder!!! You could never write anything bad I am beginning to think


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    January 28

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    This is so beautiful and spell bounding I felt the warmth from those twinkling stars that light that darkened skies
    Thanks for sharing with me xx

  • AnnD Moderators member
    January 27

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    Oh what an absolutely beautiful write.
    It is so gentle and calming. Sheer beauty through out.
    Nature at night or evening is I am sure the most beautiful and magical time.

    Ann


  • Mystal LaRose
    January 22

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    there is a beauty in this story yet it still has the normal stuff loved how u set it all up this is amazing and really good


  • libithina
    November 24, 2007

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    I thought this to be a stunning write, I loved the imagery that it evoked, as an astrologer I love the romance of the night sky, twilight is a lovely time betwixt evening and day. Loved it, Lib x x See you like Liverpool FC are you a fellow Liverpudlian

  • Thankfulspirit
    November 24, 2007

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    This is quite the beauty here....loved how this is set up...and loved the rhyme...wonderful job....enjoyed reading you...smiles, Terry


  • luna-midnight gold member
    November 24, 2007

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    this is wonderful, excellent, superb!
    your amazing wayne, this si just great and terrific!
    loved it
    xxxxxxxxxx
    stephanie


  • Angel Full Of Hurt
    November 19, 2007

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    You have a fat talent

    Wow this poem is really breathtaking..it makes me fall into dreams...i was just reading and it made me feel like sleeping NOT IN A BORING WAY but it caught me off my feet making me feel like i am floating..making me feel relaxed...clever write..you never cease to write tremendous pieces..keep this up...with you and your talent you can never walk the loser's path!


  • Myjoy gold member
    November 14, 2007

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww this is wonderful. It's so soft unlike your work most the time. I really loved to see this side of you Wayne. Thank you for entering, and good luck.


  • pearl-dragon
    November 9, 2007

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    Your words had such a beautiful flow and sense of being, in tune with nature and in tune with your own thoughts. My best wishes to you in this contest.

    Margaret


  • daviscth silver member
    November 5, 2007

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    This really is beautiful. It makes the reader feel as if they can reach out and touch. The pic is a wonderful choice for this piece. I loved it Wayne. Glad you placed in the contest. Love ya, Cathy

  • Zarokk666
    October 24, 2007
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    Hauntingly beautiful piece you've penned there...

  • Knight70
    October 24, 2007

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    This permeates my senses.

    I've always been a star-gazer. I love how you so eloquently personified the night sky. Very well done indeed! I also love the rhyme and rhythm in this piece. Good luck in the contest! Knight70


  • crystalgodess
    September 27, 2007

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    Beautiful take on the picture...Lovely visual within these words. Amazing writer, just amazing....Great job


  • onesugar silver member
    September 19, 2007

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    Breathtakingly beautiful
    I am in awe, amazed!
    I just love this
    Simply beautiful sedutive and soft
    Enchanting!
    Love ~sugar~


  • captain howdy
    September 19, 2007
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    Beautiful! SUCH AN ENCHANTING POEM! I love it!


  • B Tha Revolution
    September 18, 2007

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    I really liked the piece it was enchanted in feel and just very metaphysical in nature, it really levitates the mind to some where and the words act as the guide on that etheral journey

  • azlyn gold member
    September 16, 2007

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    Oh I loved this...so sensual and enchanting! A different side of your writing...very nice Wayne.

    Love~
    Az


  • Scrunter gold member
    September 16, 2007

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    Beautiful, just beautiful. You have done a wonderful job here wayne. It's set me up for the day! Well done on this grand write as it was such a pleasure to read. Thank you.


  • EdibleRoses
    September 15, 2007
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    I love this.

    Favorite part:
    "she disrobes at night
    before day is dawning "


  • montiebatmom
    September 14, 2007

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    Killing me softly

    I love this, it's appropriately categorized as the beautiful dark. Makes one fall in love with the night.
    "she disrobes at night
    before day is dawning"
    breathtaking Wayne...i love it
    xxxxxxx Montie


  • Tattboyspet silver member
    September 13, 2007

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    This is NOT a dark write ... it's a sensual, seductive dedication to something that is amazing
    Well done Wayne (once again, I sit here thinking what I can say that would be different, but alas, nothing comes to mind!)
    Your writing is superb and I feel blessed and honoured to be able to read it - thank you for sharing


  • Morningstar1948 gold member
    September 12, 2007

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    Sound as if you are a native American Indian My Brother

    You wrote one here as if the flute is playing the song. beautiful and soft. Like the spirit and the flute mingle and dance. Had to turn around. Six eagle forgot to put my billfold back into my purse. So going to eat lunch and try one more time to get to houston..
    Love you brother ! I'm sure with your and raggy ann and many other spirit by me. I will be safe and strong and pray the doctor can do something when I see him tomorrow.
    Love
    Your sister of blood and love
    Morningstar


  • Klayer
    September 12, 2007
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    what a wonderfull wright. Sutch great pictures

    DF, 14

  • This.is.just.adream
    September 12, 2007
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    Astonishing

    wow i love this piece it speaks to me....


  • Nature Song silver member
    September 12, 2007
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    Listen close as she whispers in the night, do not fear...Stunning write Wayne, I am left in awe! Beautiful flow and imagery. ~Sie


  • MoonsShadow gold member
    September 12, 2007

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    beautiful indeed...nature always brings out marvelous post like this,gentle nights sensually inhibits the inner spirit as it is here, good luck..MM

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