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Autums Blessing

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The wind swirls gently,
Aroma of a new day taints the skies.
Beauty in colorful shades,
Tenderly drape the Earths ground.
The river flows with the guidance of
Mother Nature’s change;
Sweet scents of pumpkin filling the house,
Children intrigued with that of life’s change.
Beauty within the presence of,
All things created, by that of Gods hands.

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Open theme on the subject of Autumn

twelve lines or less

free verse preferred

Close after fifteen entries
Great time for sharing with family and friends.Beauty lays sweetly upon the eyes during this time.

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  • poeticweaver gold member
    September 14, 2007

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    Lovely... Thanks for sharing, this makes me sigh!
    Keep on penning on, you rock poetic socks!

    Peace, the weaver~


  • Griswold silver member
    September 13, 2007

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    Beautifully written of a season that can almost rival you in beauty my love, very well done for the contest...Love You..Scott


  • tomisb
    September 13, 2007
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    Delightfully lyrical. A wonderful idyll to the season of fall. Well done.
    Love, Tom B.


  • Peteskid gold member
    September 12, 2007

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    very expressive writng, winds skies sense of movement and how things seem to change all around us, very well done; home, family, wonderful seasonal fare, very nicely done. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK


  • delightfulmess silver member
    September 12, 2007

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    Oh my this is amazing.
    I am enjoying your work today you have been busy.
    I could smell the pumpkin pie. UMMMM
    I love this picture you did a great job with it.


    delila


  • Candy6
    September 12, 2007
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    Beautiful autumn poem. Fall is beautiful.

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