Neon Harmony

Neon autumn in day's bliss
take me in your warming arms
be my sweater of dancing colors
tap in on summers scorching rays;
the crisp mellow soothing whispers
of a delicate walk in your harmony,
through an artist stream of leaves,

needing your secert beauty to own me

A contest entry

Free Fall by Peteskid. 700 points, ended September 12, 2007, 12 entries
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Peteskid
September 12, 2007

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interesting point of view here and the writing is quite expressive. Autumn as arms of embrace and colorful garment, very good imagery. very creative. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK
Klayer
September 12, 2007
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Lovly work. Simply breath taking

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