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Milking Rainbows

The ride was bumpy,

over a dirt road dream
pebbles turned to boulders,

silence turned to stone,

found the pot of gold empty,
time to chase another rainbow;

 

love torn to greed

inside the rich dream,
diamond's and silk

gather on golden highways
time is a measure forgotten,

only measure
in time is the rich's galore

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    September 29, 2007
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    beautiful and rich in detail and imagery thanks for the entry