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The Sacrifice

I've decided to keep a diary of the pain and hurt i feel
In hopes of proving to myself that this really is real
It's the middle of the night and I can't sleep a wink
With so much stress and anger that's pushed me to the brink

The people who care don't need me to even explain
The people that do, can stuff their views down the drain
I'm sick of all the views, when I go and do my very own thing
It's not my fault, I don't follow all your hip hop n bling

I try to be myself, though everyone casts me down
Don't you see? It's you who look like the clowns
You walk around all day, like you own the school
When in people's eyes, you just act like a tool

You break down their lives, wrench their souls apart
You leave them beaten and confused, they take it to heart
If only you could see, what you've done to others and to me
Or shall I make the sacrifice to show you,
.................................... so other's can be free?

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  • The Hermit
    February 19, 2008
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    Strange but at times true that sometimes it could help but don't conform and never deflate.


  • Sean Logue
    November 14, 2007

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    Well done.

    Even my own daughter has succumbed to pressure, most
    disappointed, i'm into metal shes into nonsense for
    the sake of conformity.
    I like your work, well done.

  • S7ORM au
    September 16, 2007

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    Wow

    I use to think to myself, suicide never helps anyone, but this made me think. Your poems always are so true, yet so sad. So all i can say is Wow, keep it up.


  • ckwriter69
    September 15, 2007

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    Good write on a sensitive subject. Some people just don't understand the lasting effects they have on people. Sad write and its more important that you be a voice to those who need it. Thanks for sharing


  • Tiggs
    September 13, 2007

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    aw becatory it's awesome babes
    and sad.
    you looked so tired at school today,
    i hope u get some good sleep tonight
    and dnt stress about school much
    tigmatic hayley


  • The-Singer
    September 12, 2007

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    I love it.
    It's fantastic.
    I agree with cameron.
    It isn't a word
    But I do agree it's one of the most cleverly written poems of yours and the rest.
    Great work birdy pirate robot.

    Seannicle


  • Walking Tall
    September 12, 2007

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    probably one of the most ... cleverly (not a very real word but meh) written poems ofyours
    it has great ideas in it
    a great message
    and the rymes are awesome
    i love you!
    SeeJ

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