I fell in love of the truth,
Forgot totally what will be fate!
Struggled only all the way.
Forgot totally what will be fate!
I fell in love of the truth.
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Option-5.
A contest entry
- Short and meaningful by tender-butterfly.
470 points, ended September 26, 2007, 17 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Judging on the scale below:
1. Passionate write 3/6
Some passion, but too short to tell for sure.
2. Visualization 3/6
Struggled through what?
3. Grammar & Spelling 5/5
There were no errors.
4. Interesting & Convincing 2/4
Short but sweet in the interesting arena, but you did not convince me of anything.
5. Follows the Rules 4/4
Thank you for following the rules
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TOTAL SCORE 17/25
I enjoyed your short but sweet little pen here, but I felt it lacked depth. This however is only my humble opinion. Have a great day.
Write on!
)O(
DragonBlue
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Thank you for sharing this write.
You really have added so much meaning in this write.
Well done and sll the best to you.
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