Now, Fall,
filling Springtime's promise,
harvests
Summer's favours
from its fields and orchards
for cold Winter's comfort.
A contest entry
- Seasons... [prewrites permitted] =] by sora..
600 points, ended September 20, 2008, 59 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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sweet and concise.
brilliant!
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You have managed to make Autumn the Master of the Months and she orchestrates the whole year - never thought of of like that before, thanks.
I thought it clever that you were able to describe a whole year's activity in one sentence. Often at work, I have felt like Autumn; bringing into fruition other's ideas/promises, and the fruits of my labour,then, enjoyed by someone else and not me. -
beautifully penned vision of Autumn , loved the poem
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Hi. Thanks very much. I really appreciate your taking the time to comment, humbled. Cheers, jimmy
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