An enticing attire
an enthusing man
under the moonlit night
favour the flavour of love
Her enraged nerves
his engaging lips
makes the nectar
to stream fluently
when two hearts
two minds
two souls
and two bodies
crave to unite
a heaven comes down to earth
to bless them both
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Author notes
springing love showers nectar drops
A contest entry
- Romance..................................... by Entwining Beauty.
300 points, ended October 6, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Your best PW from 2007... by O.o.
1000 points, ended January 11, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
-
This is a beautiful piece of work, however you need to work on your grammar. Otherwise, great job! thank FOR ENTERING!
-
wonderful penned poem you have woven so much love into such a small poem good luck in my contest
-
THANK YOU
Thank you for the good words showered on me
purush -
beautifully put! The last 2 lines are my fave. Good luck!
Adding your comment:
