Swiftly moving graphite grey
Quickly loosing its point to smooth
Blunt tool laying sharp words
Sharper than axe splitting things in two
Words, Pencil, Pen, Paper..
Thoughts
Power at your hand; encircled.
A surgence onto paper; exhausting.
Spent... (Phew!)
Please tell me what you think
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I always knew I had some power in me
and now I just read it in your poem...It's my pencil and paper...I think I need to use it some day soon...sharpen my pencil first to see if that might help
I loved the wordsplay here to express the feelings from a true writer
I am sure your pencil is ready to use it
Lovely,
XXJeannette
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Thankies J.. I think all our powerful little pencils to paper are ready.. Keep writing
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wow.. this is a lovely write.. very enlightening too.. how many of us can ponder over such a theme? very fresh...i m impressed by ur write. thanks for sharing. Keep writing, cuz the pen is mightier than the sword.
my fave:
"Power at your hand; encircled.
A surgence onto paper; exhausting"
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Hey, thank you M'am for your very kind comment..
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well... it sounded better when you read it out to me... lol... kiddin... its great...
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Just a fun spill out thingy that just spilled out lol
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