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Satellite of Bliss

 

 

 

The truth: 

"Your radiance rarely appears in a lifetime". 

 

 

In your face, only seen at night

I see an uncertain perfection

yet believable as you embrace my soul

 

 

I wish you could stay longer and often

to release the tension and stress.  

As your silvery shining twin sibling does

 

 

Like a thin layer of happiness

under the shade of unknown darkness

You light up a certain shade of bliss

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Written September 12, 2007

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    September 26, 2007
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    this is lovely


  • Namita
    September 20, 2007
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    Wow... so simple and light... loved the beauty and radiance in this piece.

    Luv,
    ~Candy


  • Nicolette gold member
    September 12, 2007

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    This is lovely and I liked the way that this poem can be interpreted on both a literal or a metaphorical level.. a real moon or the light of a lover. Loved the last line!

    ~ Nicolette