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Killin Kinda Man


Hey
You
Standing over there
What the hell you lookin' at
Why you gotta stare?

I
Know
What you're tryin' ado
One more months probation
Then I'm comin' after you.


~


Laws ain't gonna change me
It's me, it's who I am
I'll say the Lord has saved me
But I'm a killin' kinda man.

~


Hey
You
Laughing with your friends
I know that the jokes on me
Well soon the mocking ends.

Don't
You
Take that man to bed
'Cause if you do I'll kill'im too
And then you'll both be dead

Yes Sir I'm truly sorry
I found God whilst here inside
If I could I'd turn back time
Approved! Released, he lied.

~


Laws ain't gonna change me
It's me, it's who I am
I'll say the Lord has saved me
But I'm a killin' kinda man.

~


Hey
You
Yeh you with golden hair
Why are you tormentin' me?
I ain't the type to share

You may not have known it
But I have chosen you
To dance now with a stranger
Well now that makes you untrue

~


Laws ain't gonna change me
It's me, it's who I am
I'll say the Lord has saved me
But I'm a killin' kinda man.

~


Yes Sir I'm truly sorry
This time I really tried
I found strength in Jesus Christ
Approved, we're moved, she died.

~


Laws ain't gonna change me
It's me, it's who I am
I'll say the Lord has saved me
But I'm a killin' kinda man.





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  • stilllake
    September 25, 2007

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    interesting

    I'm not sure what you're trying to say... but it is suitable for a popsong, lyrics for a singer or group who have something to say. About prison and the laws that make criminals worse instead of better and society who makes criminals in the first place, out of unfortunate people.


  • neon nightmares
    September 14, 2007

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    its cool

    it seems to have some mocking qualities about it, which does actually work. Its slightly random and totally different to all the other stuff ive read today. Great piece all the same. keep it up
    huggles
    xxxx


  • James R
    September 13, 2007

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    Amaizing write my dear friend i loved it from the start to the finsh and Law's ain't goign to change any of us the more they put laws upon us the more we wish to break these laws


    • daisybee
      September 13, 2007
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      Thanks!

      I have no idea where this came from, but I'm glad you liked it. x

  • Westley
    September 12, 2007

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    I like it!

    Laws ain't gonna change any of us, just make us obey them or pay the price. But that does nothing to teach, or to encourage reflection.

    Would like to hear this as a song with some heavy accoustic and a light-hearted, but deep voice bellowing out the lines...


    • daisybee
      September 12, 2007
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      thanks!

      I could hear it as a song when the words came, so I'm glad it worked for you!

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