Leaves everywhere,
Swirling with the violent wind in a ritual
Condemning the warm weather and embracing
Complete serenity - Nature.
Leaves everywhere,
Gathering the remains of hindered souls
Who have been lost in the journey
To the everlasting - Nature.
Leaves everywhere,
Experiencing life's complex joys
And nurturing kindred beings to
Loving refuge - Nature.
A contest entry
- Free Fall by Peteskid.
700 points, ended September 12, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Nature Nuts by xox-emma-xox.
425 points, ended April 5, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Worthy of Gold by Virgoan.
900 points, ended April 17, 2008, 73 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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short and definitely lovely. there so much in this short write.
thanks for sharing and keep writing.
HENSLEY
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What a lovely write! It stirred a calm, peaceful pace in me... I like it very much. The background suits it well too. In hancing the effect of the poem. Well done. Finalist list for sure!
Emma^_^
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a complicated set of images here, serenity and violent swirls, leaves and hindered souls, so many dramatic contrasts and surprising connections; very imaginative writing. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK
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