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Colorful Blessings

Missing image
Nature reflection is mirrored
take in her golden hue; beauty
beyond compare.
Place it on your heart, feel
it just like I do.
Hear the whisper through
the scarlet forest; harvest
is drawing closer so near.
Hay stacks, pumpkin patches
holidays underway.
I pick-up my sweater backing
off the chill as I take my
last gander of the
colorful blessing I feel.



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the subject of Autumn

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  • Peteskid gold member
    September 12, 2007

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    well done a wonderful use of imagery to connect with the blush of colors and the events: harvest, autumn hardy fruits; well done reflecting fall experiences, sights and smells. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK


  • tomisb
    September 12, 2007
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    gentle, swimming in the glory of fall.
    Lovely,
    Tom B.


  • Silvos. silver member
    September 12, 2007

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    Enchanting..

    Awesome imagery that enabled me to get a perfect mental picture of the picture you painted with your words. Great luck in your contest.

    -Silvos.