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Green To Gold

As Autumn Aproaches
The Sweet Smell Of Fall
Is In The Air
The Weather Turns To The South
The Leaves....
The Leaves Add The Color
The Diffrent Shades Of Green
Fade From Green To Gold
In The Most Delacate
Way Shape Or Form Possible
That Just Makes You Want To
Freeze Time......

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  • Namita
    September 20, 2007

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    Wonderful usages of metaphor. WOW. The last line was beautiful. Good use of nature to depict your ideas.

    Luv,
    ~Candy


    • Izu
      September 20, 2007
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      thank you, im glad that you enjoyed it.


  • Plastic Dreams
    September 19, 2007

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    I really enjoyed the imagery of wanting this to stay, exactly the way it is.

    The caps for every word kinda throw me off for each line, but none the less, enjoyed.

    I'm a huge fan of naturistic stances. and this was well done


  • Star Shine
    September 19, 2007

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    If only we could extend the colors and scents of autumn and enjoy them longer into the year, make the colors stay vivid beyond that first touch of frost. Well done. Thanks for the entry. Need to correct spelling on the word "delicate"


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 17, 2007

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    WOW freezing in time would be awesome with this sort of poem,taking in all themes and embrace them fore ever,nice poem here,thanks for entering gl
    MM


  • Peteskid gold member
    September 12, 2007

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    very nice, a good sentiment and well expressed, the beauty that makes us wish it would last, some things are precious because they are so temporary, well done. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK

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