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Coming Home - My Pet 12 (Sonnet)

Missing image
Another deep dark night, another plane
Yet now I smile as I sit cramped in here
For only nine more hours alone remain
Until I see the face of her so dear

Each mile I fly brings me closer to home
To eyes so bright and kisses warm and soft
The pain of parting when I start to roam
Forgotten now my heart flies high aloft

And yet I truly never left her side
For we are one and cannot really part
Each waking moment thoughts of her abide
And dreams keep her forever in my heart

As I once more traverse the skies above
The long night flight brings me back to my love

Author notes

This was written on the plane after a three week trip away from the love of my life.

The photos were also taken on the plane.

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  • Tattboyspet
    September 13, 2007

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    DAMN - i just noticed that i forgot to give You claps ... my sincerest apologies


  • HaleyMary
    September 12, 2007

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    Beautiful write. Wonderful flow and emotion. It makes me think of how even when people are apart from each other for awhile, love knows no distance and can always survive.


    • Tattboy silver member
      September 13, 2007
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      Thank you for your kind comment Arzab, you are absolutely right!

  • Tattboyspet
    September 12, 2007
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    Thank You Master ... as always Your words have touched my heart
    It is true - W/we were never really apart, but sometimes it was difficult to tell my heart that
    Thank You for coming home - i missed You terribly!
    Forever Yours,


    • Tattboy silver member
      September 12, 2007

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      I missed you too My darling pet, but I am back now

      Your Loving Master

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