Shhh. Stand still, darling.
her limbs are slowly bending
& might be giving in
[but not giving up]
her hands are grasping the balloons
that used to only hope for air to head home
She blew up those balloons with her oxygen
& then, popped them all to reveal the message stuck inside.
[your.life.ends.here.]
but, dear.
She collected the Jones bottle caps
& followed the yellow brick road
[that's where she found you.]
His hands comfort her insides
warming up her sense of reality
& shaking up the snow globe of her existence
[He turned her life around
& ever since, she can't stop smiling]
the sun beams down on her freckled face
& upturned, her lips breathe in the rays
their lips connect & it's like [l-l-lightning]
first it shocks & then, well,
[it's breathtaking.]
Author notes
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A contest entry
- SPEEDY!!! by LadyLeviathan.
300 points, ended September 13, 2007, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
happy. happy. happy.
Comments
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omfg.
Loved this!!
its so cute and clever..
i just love your poetry
it makes me so happy =] -
wow this is so sweet its romantic too in a young teenage way tis so cute i love it
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this is terribly cute! i couldnt help but smile the whole way through! definately loved this piece! thank you for your entry!
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omgigod.
Sooo cute hun!
like.. whoa!
loving the title
&& well.. everything!
xx
♥
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You contain such creativity...... the title kicks ass.
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Oh nice. I loved it! The format and style of this piece was neat and I just love the message... it's a little random but I can tell it's personal. I absolutely adore the Jones bottles bit. That's great.
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so good. so cute!
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