Sacred Spectrum

When I die...

leave me here
at waterfalls' edge
where mists will soften
deaths' cyan hue.

Spirit soar
join sacred spectrum
suspended in spray
as the light
slowly fades away.

Author notes

quickie: milking a rainbow

A contest entry

PIF - Milking A Rainbow by amaranthine lover. 425 points, ended September 29, 2007, 9 entries
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amaranthine lover
September 29, 2007
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beautiful masterpiece here thanks for the entry

natchstucco
September 12, 2007

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beautiful script
A nice little storey here. I love the metaphors.
suspended in spray
as the light
slowly fades away.

these are great

Heavens Child
September 12, 2007

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Beautiful imagery you've penned in these few lines. 'where mists will soften deaths' cyan hue', just gorgeous! Best wishes in the contest!

right now

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