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Pearl

Hidden deep within
In the depth of its soul
Pain brings a harvest
A treasure untold
A gift birthed from the deep within

A contest entry

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  • tender-butterfly
    September 25, 2007

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    Interesting

    Thank you for this great entry into my contest...

    This is really well done.. Your rhymes seems more outstanding than others in the contest....

    Love it...
    Well done and all the best