The Moonlight's cold
As your arms no longer hold me
As your gaze no longer look's my way
As the moonlight shadows fade
The Moonlight's cold
Tonight of all night's
The wind blows your scent
I can't feel your touch
This bitterness is too much
The Moonlight's cold
I see where you used to be
I'm missing a part of who I used to be
You were that part of me
This lonely frost isn't just on my window sill
The Moonlight's cold
It's not just the empty pillow chill
This pain is too much
Hypothermia on my heart
The Moonlight's Cold
Will leave in the morning light
But first I must...
Survive this lonely night
Author notes
you are my sunshine, my only sunshine, you make me happy when skies are gray"
A contest entry
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375 points, ended October 24, 2007, 39 entries
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This poem is so sad. I really like it though. I liked the repitition, and I thought it was beautifully expressive. I think I actually teared up a little bit.
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Thanks YOU! I'm really glad you liked it!
I wrote this over a year ago.
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Thank you for taking the time enter and good luck to you!
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This is so romantically sad...it sends shivers up my spine. I've been in that place, looking up at the moon in sorrow and a broken heart...
Beautiful poem
good luck in the contest
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*sigh* You have written what i feel many nights now as my husband is away, and you have done that beautifully...Love it...
All the best...I miss him more now...
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Awww so touching and very heartfelt and sad, oh the feeling every night, I feel that all the time hunny...
Oh I feel the deep heart...
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Wow.. I like this poem alot. The repetition of the Moonlight's cold and adding new emotions of the same lonliness and depression mae me fall in love with this peice. Good luck in the above listed contest.
-Silvos.
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