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The Devil in Your Thoughts

saucy and sexy
it slips into your words and thoughts
in a costume of benign
spreading and tainting all around
as good thoughts turn to bad
shaking out the morals, chivalry, and kindness
picking up a knife instead of a Bible
Coke replaces sugar
As the thoughts swirl and mix and cloud
In a once pure mind
food goes back to the toilet
Rockets shoot into the skies
All from that one word or phrase
That still echoes in your ear
Turning a once pure little girl
into
something else

Author notes

yes...title explains it mostly, a devil's advocate as a seed of doubt

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  • Jiyo
    September 28, 2007

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    kinda like the devil inside, your guilty concience....God i hate drug dealers, they really are cum sucking bastards that only care about themselves and their money..... and thats what this reminds me of, so kudos to you, nicely done