Be aware of internal,
not external rhyming,
in a variety of poems
whose works span from alluring amber to
an elusive epiphany about how it dawned
on someone's somber son.
For example, internal rhyme
underlines rhyming sounds
finely inside of a line,
unlike words randomly
thrown together on paper.
Thus, it presents accenting
structure smoothly in a poem.
Internal rhyme, when written
with alliteration, have similar sounds
and makes an amber dawn allured.
This is similar to how
the sun's secret seems succulent,
developing designs of doubt
while making the amber dawn poignantly powerful.
So note: some words will
work well in internal rhyme,
when written with another
poetic phoneme technique.
A contest entry
- MUSE ABUSE II : INTERNAL RHYME, AND ALLITERATION by Everwind Rising.
450 points, ended September 12, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Cleverly written although I must admit, a bit bewieldering for me. Excellent use of alliteration throughout and internal rhyme when used.
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