A full moon high in the sky,
the Goddess gives us her blessings,
just like that first night,
when you introduced me to the dark.
My first hunt, thrilling.
My first bite, intoxicating.
And you by my side,
through the entire night.
A full moon high in the sky,
the Goddess gives us her blessings,
just like that first night,
when you introduced me to the dark.
That night seems so long ago now,
but feels so real still,
I can hear your laughter,
and taste your lips on mine.
But as the full moon begins to set,
the Goddess gives us her last blessings,
as I kiss your lips and say goodbye,
keeping your memory with me for eternity.
Author notes
Werewolf Avarus
A contest entry
- dark vampiric romance by hardwire.
300 points, ended May 18, 2008, 12 entries
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Very interesting. Great job.
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I loved the lines
"as I kiss your lips and say goodbye,
keeping your memory with me for eternity."
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Thank you
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good work. it has exelent wording, tone, and flow. great work. keep it up.
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u smell
i love it kate, anothr beautiful write , love ya
yukio__.
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good wording and flow, an exelent work.
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Ahh i see Kate
Incredibly good wording
Well done! it will go well with ur art
Luv Tam xxx
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This has a increible sensuous, mysterious feel brought on by excellent use of wording. I also like the repetition of the beginning verse, it works very well. Great work.
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