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Rip Me Open Your My Weakness

Rip me open,
Sew me shut,
I am just another,
One of your abused little sluts.

I put on my glitter,
I gather my glam,
I hurriedly dress the occasion,
Then we begin to dance.

Rose red lips,
With a shimmer of gloss.
Pretty pink eyes,
Sparkle of dazzle.

Dressed to impress,
I flash the pearly whites.
You smile and go on,
Then I pay the rest of the night.

All the forming whelps,
On my naked skin.
As I cry out of pain,
You start to grin.

All the hurt,
All the pain,
All the broken bones,
All you leave me is shame.

So I will ask,
Am I just another,
One of your abused little sluts?
Or am I different,
Am I the one?

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  • oldphotosonlybringt
    September 12, 2007
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    wow strong i loved it bunches.....


  • Ocean Gurl
    September 12, 2007
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    Awwwwwwwwwww

    Very nicely written girl.I LOVE IT I LOVE EVERY SINGLE LINE OF IT!!! =] KEEP IT UP!!! LOVE YA