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whispered massage (silver trophy)


 

touching, your fingers gently caressing

your whispers, soft words of persuasion

as they gently coax new sensations

pausing for loving response

 

your breath, soft upon my flesh

entices me with the pleasure of your voice

as it softly speaks

cajoling, manipulating, seeking

 

subtle pleasure, promising words

dreamlike in its persistance

singing to me as it touches my skin

quietly flirting, soothing

 

 ‘tis a piece of heaven, this whispered song

flowing from your lips instinctively

soothing my tingling body

smoothing my furrowed brow

 

don’t take me from this place

this place to which you’ve brought me

where love and lust combine

whispering my body to calmness

 

then quietly carrying me away

on the waves of whispers

 

dee garner

© september 11, 2007

 

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  • Mad Moon silver member
    October 4, 2007

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    Dee...this is exquisite, my friend! Beautifully penned, indeed! So full of passion, tenderness, and longing....just WOW! Congratulations on a well deserved Silver!!


  • Celticmoon
    October 4, 2007

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    ooops
    forgot something


  • Celticmoon
    October 4, 2007
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    Well Dang!

    I am not the easiest to impress when it comes to love poetry nor sensual writing. I, quite honestly, am a rather harsh judge of said genre; however, I admit, I am IMPRESSED! the images the come to mind as each line is read pull from the reader a quieted sigh of longing pleasure. I found nothing in this piece that turned my attention away from thoughts of melting into the mind, body and soul of my lover. This is winderfully sensual and superbly penned! Thank you for entering and good luck!


    Blessings
    Bel


    • catz Moderators member
      October 4, 2007
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      Wow, thank you for such a wonderful critique, Bel It's much appreciated.


      Dee


  • Lyndon gold member
    September 16, 2007

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    Dear Dee

    This poem coincides with my precisefeelings of a radio announcer on national classic FM, Australia. She has a beautifully soothing voice that wraps around me. The music she plays is an added bonus. I kid myself I am in love with her but I know nothing about her personally nor her appearance - just her amazing voice and turn of phrase - and she is obviously very intelligent. So, that is how your poem connected with me. Thank you.


  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    September 13, 2007

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    Like I said on this poem's invisible twin, I like this one far better...first it is subtle and romantic, alluring and discreet...and it has WORDS!


    • catz Moderators member
      October 4, 2007
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      Lol... I'm glad you like it, Ima... and guess what, it won Silver in the contest


    • catz Moderators member
      September 13, 2007
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      Lol... sorry about that, Ima... I thought that other one had been deleted. It was just a placeholder in a contest. I guess I better start paying more atention to my page, huh. I've deleted the other one now, though I loved your comment on it...haha

      Thanks for reading this one and your nice comment.

      Dee


  • Heavens Child
    September 12, 2007

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    You captivate your audience with such an alluring, sensual piece. I'm not one for love poems of any kind but this blew me away. Brilliant work. Best wishes in the contest.


    • catz Moderators member
      September 12, 2007
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      Thank you for reading this and for the nice comment It's much appreciated.

      Dee


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 12, 2007

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    This is so beautiful!
    Sensually and tastefully written with love and sensuality intertwined...
    So lovely!

    Lynda


    • catz Moderators member
      September 12, 2007
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      Thank you, poet2angels. Your read and kind comment are appreciated. I'm glad you like the poem

      Dee


  • Vernal Bloom
    September 11, 2007

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    Hi my darling auntie
    Wow how lucky I am! I still have the chance of reading your poems. This is great and I was sure about it before clicking on it!
    Thank you so much for the happiness you always bring us with your delighted poems and good luck in the contest

    ~Massy~


    • catz Moderators member
      September 11, 2007
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      Hi, Massy And thank you for such a nice compliment. I'm glad you're still able to get online.

      love and
      Auntie Dee

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