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Only In A Blue Moon

Once in a blue moon
maybe tears wont fall
and perhaps a smile
will shine as the stars
-within
      a happy
memory-

Once in a blue moon
a happy bird
will sing the melody
of a once broken heart
-healing itself
      with each
happy kiss-

Once in a blue moon
the sun wont rise
and upon each star,
I’ll wish for something
I never knew I’d find
-but not all happiness
        is the picture
  perfect image-

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  • DancingRed
    September 26, 2007

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    ah, yes it is those small happy things that make living worthwhile. Good luck in the contest with this lovely poem.

    DancingRed.


  • amaranthine lover gold member
    September 26, 2007
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    this is beautiful thanks for the entry


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    September 17, 2007
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    Very Nice

    Awww Sweets this is quite a poerm and I really enjoy how well penned this poem is. what really amazes me is how the wording flows so beautifully and also how well they come together. any ways this is just an excellent poem and keep up the good work. Daddy


  • DecayedxBeauty
    September 12, 2007
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    Great job Meg!
    I miss you chica. Keep on writing.