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Good Boy

The enemy hides in plain sight,
sixteen deaths taped to his breast
- directly over the heart -
in addition to his own.

Paradise awaits:  that's what
he has been told, anyway.

Only eight years old.  What does a
child know of things like that?  What
does he know of seventy
seven virgins, Paradise?

He's just following orders.
He wants to be a good boy.

(c) 2007, Karla Dorman.  (9/11)

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Reading the autobiography of a child soldier inspired this one. God have mercy ...

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