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Gold

Have you
ever seen,
by sunray's
beam,
a leprechaun
at work?

At rainbow's
end,
he will bend
and on the
colors jerk.

Red, green,
and blue,
what's he up
to?
Then you hear
a "plop!"

I have been
told,
that pots of
gold,
are milked in
drips and drops.

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    September 29, 2007
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    quite interesting take on the prompt thanks for the entry


  • Mirthryl
    September 12, 2007
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    Nice meter and rhyme, and a very fun, creative idea you depict!


    • islekine gold member
      September 12, 2007
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      Thanks...

      When I saw the prompt...milking a rainbow..
      this just came to me...lol...I love magical
      things.....thanks for commenting!
      *PEACE*


  • Myjoy gold member
    September 11, 2007

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    Oh I love this. What a wonderful thing to read and just fall into tonight. Well done really it's great.

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