Visions vex in vicarious elation
thunderous flashes inflame sight,
burning with inspiration's torches,
mind sculpts the gossamer ribbon
of hope's many hues.
Soaking the fantasy radiance
until a prism of transcendent reality
stirs in the mind.
Colors stir their vibrant stew
in quintessential strokes
sky and soul swim tangential
towards the pot of gold kept in the heart
and used as coins of love
showered upon others
bathing them in rainbow clarity.
Author notes
Prompt - Milking a Rainbow
A contest entry
- PIF - Milking A Rainbow by amaranthine lover.
425 points, ended September 29, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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you always surprise me with beautiful words thanks for the entry


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Wow~
Another Wonderful take on the prompt
love the words...
sky and soul swim tangential
and gossamer ribbon

Beautifully penned
Thank You for sharing this
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~


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Thank you sweetheart. Your words are alway the garment of love that wraps my soul.
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oh, this is amazing...
You have done justice to the prompt with your beautiful piece..
Lynda


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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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