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After the storm


Visions vex in vicarious elation
thunderous flashes inflame sight,
burning with inspiration's torches,
mind sculpts the gossamer ribbon
of hope's many hues.

Soaking the fantasy radiance
until a prism of transcendent reality
stirs in the mind.

Colors stir their vibrant stew
in quintessential strokes
sky and soul swim tangential
towards the pot of gold kept in the heart
and used as coins of love
showered upon others
bathing them in rainbow clarity.

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Prompt - Milking a Rainbow

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  • amaranthine lover gold member
    September 29, 2007
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    you always surprise me with beautiful words thanks for the entry


  • Desire gold member
    September 12, 2007

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    Wow~

    Another Wonderful take on the prompt
    love the words...
    sky and soul swim tangential
    and gossamer ribbon


    Beautifully penned
    Thank You for sharing this

    Many blessings to You in the contest
    Best wishes too
    and my Love~ Desire~*~


    • penman gold member
      September 12, 2007
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      Thank you sweetheart. Your words are alway the garment of love that wraps my soul.


  • poet2angels gold member
    September 11, 2007

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    oh, this is amazing...
    You have done justice to the prompt with your beautiful piece..
    Lynda


    • penman gold member
      September 11, 2007
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      Thank you for the wonderful comment.

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